I found myself reflecting on how living and breathing tech has let me experience some of the most rewarding moments of my life … (Para. 8)
A. I found myself thinking that tech is living and breathing and has offered me some of the most rewarding moments of my life …
B. I was thinking about how immersing myself in tech has offered me some of the most rewarding moments of my life …
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The irony is that by stepping away from all things digital for a while, I actually felt even more appreciative of it.
A. What ironic is, I actually felt even more appreciative of the internet after quitting it for a while.
B. The irony is that I actually become even more cherish the internet after quitting it for a while.
With the digital explosion has come an excess of cheap, easy, and addictive pieces of online content for us to readily snack on.(para 11)
An excess of cheap, easy, and addictive pieces of online content has come with the digital explosion and we cansnack oneasily.
B. With the digital explosion we have come to an excess of cheap, easy, and addictive pieces of online content to readily snack on.
So instead of funny cat pictures, dive into some of the great “long reads” that show up on your screen. (Para. 12)
A. So instead of funny cat pictures, spend your time on diving and read some great long articles that show up on your screen.
B. So instead of viewing funny cat pictures, spend your time reading some great long articles that show up on your screen.
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